I’ve had a bit of an e-mail from a nice chap called Eamon this week. It was a bit of an impassioned plea.
“Oh ho.” I thought. “Here’s a would-be affiliate at the end of his tether and no mistake about it!”
Basically, he’s been asking people for opinions on his carefully crafted affiliate site, and gotten a LOT of negative feedback and absolutely no suggestions about what to bloody well do about it!
Here’s his e-mail: -
Hi Kirsty,
I’ve just stumbled across this site almost by accident and am looking forward
to settling down to investigate it further tomorrow when it’s not so late.
I’m in a bit of a state. Just over a year ago, I decided to “try” my hand at
doing this. Coming from a cosmetics background and having done programming at
university I thought it would be easy. It’s not! lol.
I’ve spent just about the last year learning new programming languages and I’ve
now just finally got it right to do with my site what I need it to, but the
design is terrible!!
It was critiqued heavily online when I asked for some opinions and in
comparison to other sites can see why. I’m really stuck as to where to go from
here.
All this, and I haven’t even begun to properly develop advertising for the
site.
What would you recommend me doing as far as getting a decent template for the
kind of business I’m trying to establish and what to do net. Feel like I’m at a
cross roads and I really don’t know where to go now.
Has it all been for nothing? lol
Any kind words of encouragement?
The Site: http://www.dogfightuk.com
Hi Eamon,
Glad you found the blog useful!
The site is at least quite clean looking in terms of design and you clearly know how to manipulate datafeeds. With that as a start, you’ve really done a lot… the rest is just due dilligence and can really be done quite easily…honest!
OK, I will start with a bit of harsh criticism (sorry!). I really hate that domain name. As a web user it makes me wonder exactly what I’ll see when I click that link! OK, from a posh branding point of view it might make a degree of sense, but I think you need to find a brandable name that’s more obviously connected to men’s grooming. Without a multi-million quid advertising campaign I think the trendy-sounding domain you have will put new users off before they even click through from a search engine.
But Criticism aside….
Here’s a bit of a checklist for you to work through. I’m sure you’ve heard all the other criticisms before so instead of demotivating you I’m going to tell you what else you need to be doing to make this site work.
1. Content, Content, Content - Much like the mantra of those irritating TV real estate agents the old adage about content being kind is just sooooo true. You need to put in a whole load of work to create some truly unique content about your products. If you want an ice cube’s chance in hell of ranking for some of those brand terms you will need to write some unique copy about each of the brands you are going to be featuring. I’ve been doing this for a new lingerie site of mine -
http://www.lingeriebrands.co.uk
It is absolutely what you need to do to make the site work. No ifs, buts or maybes. Follow this up with product reviews, how to articles, skincare advice and as much male grooming type things as you can cram in and you will be on a winner. It’s a huge job and no question about it, but if you want to make a go of affiliate marketing you need to be able to provide
good content.
You might consider adding some of this content in a blog format as Google really yums this kind of stuff up and indexes it real quick.
2. Get Some Link Lurrrve!
You need to spend a bit of time getting some nice, relevant incoming links. Again, a blog section can help you to do this as you will be able to submit yourself to blog directories and target other bloggers for exchanges.
I did an “Ask Kirsty” about building links a while ago, perhaps you might find it useful if you’re not familiar with basic techniques.
A few links in combination with some compelling content, and you’ll be up to 150 SEO visitors a day real quick!
3. A Bit Of SEO Jiggery Pokery Goes A Long Way…
Your pages are clean cut and look quite nice, but a few simple SEO Tweaks will make them just as attractive to the search engines as to your Metrosexual site visitors.
- Get some nice relevant text high up on your home page. Part of the box currently containing the picture of that smashing young fella in his jimmy jammies would be favourite. I think the current design looks nice, but could be put to better use. Perhaps leave the chap sitting there and add some nice text and links about your key content.
The reason this is a good idea is that search engines see the home page of a site as the most relevant to your content (hence it’s called the index page). It’s therefore given additional weighting in the search engines, and optimising it gives you the best chance of ranking for really generic search terms.
- Fiddle about with your navigation and move the breadcrumb menus I noticed you were using on some pages. I thought it should be at the top of the page rather than below product descriptions. Very minor I know… but that’s where users will look for it!
I also thought you should extend usage of your breadcrumb menus throughout the site. You seem to have them at individual product level, but not on the actual brand feature pages.
- Your use of the brand logo on each page is good. However, I reckon you need to get that pushed down the page a bit and pop in a nice looking bit of header text saying the same thing. The content towards the top of any web page and the contents of fields such as headers are used by search engines to work out what the page is about. The more text of relevance to your brand names you can get in, the better from an SEO standpoint.
- Improve Your Cross Linkage
Again, the more pages in a site which link to your main areas of content the better. Once more this is because of how search engines will analyse the structure of a site to determine which are more relevant. The more incoming external links to your page, the better they will rank.
Phew! Well, I could say more but I reckon I’ll have given you about 3 months hard yakka with that one.
I did get a follow up mail about this from Eamon as I double checked to make sure he’d realise I might post his query! He says he’s off to have a re-think. I thought the site was pretty savable, but I’m thinking that Eamon has maybe decided to try something a bit smaller for his first attempt. Getting a site with that breadth of content right is a lot of hard work when you’re not sure if what you are doing works.
Good luck Eamon, do let us know how you get on!













February 21st, 2008 at 10:58 am
Great post as usual Kirsty, very useful advice.
February 21st, 2008 at 11:34 am
Some really good advice there Kirsty which I will be utilising myself. I hope Eamon doesn’t give up as I think his site has loads of potential.
February 21st, 2008 at 8:28 pm
I would say his design needs work. The title font is good and I like the middle picture, but the rest of the content needs work! Those content section tabs at the top are nasty, white on light blue just doesnt capture your eye and then the navigation on the left side, again, white on light blue, you can hardly read it, bad choice, it also shouldnt be down there.
People want to find a user friendly site BEFORE they notice the advertising. And you advertising wont get noticed if theyre too busy trying to figure out how to navigate your site.
A lot of jumbled info hits you at once on the site also, its not concise and needs organising.
I hope that helps, I have no qualifications, but I have a talented eye for good design and useability!
February 21st, 2008 at 10:18 pm
forgot to mention, dogfightuk sounds like youre about to go to a site about basement dog fighting in darkest essex or something! i really had no idea it was a men’s grooming site. i get that it might be about it being a dog eat dog world and therefor taking care of yourself put you ahead of the pack, but if thats the way youre going, then mention that on the site!
there is no personal and direct communication to your customers so your site is impersonal and to be frank, id rather use one more professional looking because a professional looking site makes me feel like im going to get a great service and therefor I want to buy from that site
February 22nd, 2008 at 9:16 pm
Hi guys,
Well, I must say I didn’t think I would get so many responses. lol.
On the basis of what Kirsty and you guys have said, which I do agree with, I have decided to almost call this site a practice run and go back to the drawing board. I have agreed about the name for sometime now, but… originally there was a concept behind it, method in my madness. It kind of fell flat on its face though. lol. You’ll laugh when I tell you BodyShop actually rejected my application to list their products as - while they liked the site - they couldn’t be seen to be associated with a website with a name like that!!! That should have been a wake up call, eh? lol
So my plan is to spend the next 6 months actually researching my target audience. I did throw myself into it full throttle at the beginning, not really thinking about that side of things. The most important thing is that I have the functionality of the site sorted, so going back to basics and taking my time with it should hopefully get results when I launch my new website.
What I am really happy with, and what I think is important, is that I felt like I had plateaued in a way and didn’t know what else to do. This is something I think anyone starting an affiliate site can feel like at times. And Kirsty - and you all - have given some sound advice and “support” - which is seriously lacking on internet, so for anyone else feeling in a similar situation, there is hope for you. Take a step back and re-evaluate. It all comes together in the end! Promise!
Thanks for all your kind words and honest critique.
Cheers!
Eamo :o)
February 22nd, 2008 at 10:19 pm
No worries Eamon, and good luck. As you say, the site functionality is there… a huge part of the affiliate battle. The rest is all “jiggery pokery” which is how I define the undefinable magic affiliate marketers work with their online offerings!
February 24th, 2008 at 8:34 pm
It’s great to see some proper blogging work from you Kirsty for a change
Great advice.
And you are so… right, the name sucks.
But Eamon, maybe keep the site name:- Red letter days, bandits at 6 o’clock high! They’ll never take us alive. Arrrr……….
February 27th, 2008 at 9:52 pm
Eamon, just a quick word to say that while you are doing your target audience research, do something to improve your website daily.
In six months time, when you have defined your audience [shouldn't take 6 months by the way] you will also be making improvements to your website, either on the SEO front or content front or both.
A little bit every day can add up to quite a lot over that period of time